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Thinking Through Feedback

sabrinaisawriter — Wed, 27 May 2009 14:25:35 +0000

the feedback that was so helpful to me was whe n Mr. Weiler helped me and told me that i had alot of good poems, and that they was all so creative. my poems made sense and he liked the way i set them up in the standards that made them look good. i took my time doing this and put my best forward. i was so happy when i had only a little errors. i also liked how sameerah put that my poems seemed so real and i know that because i tried to make them seem like they were real i was really proud of myself because at the beginning of the schoo year i could not even write any poems. i didnt like to because i thought they were boring and i didnt like to. i really like my poems but i will make some changes like grammar errors and punctuations errors to make it look nicer. i think my poems will be getting a good grade because i tried really hard on it and i never been more serios about doing something in my life. now i really like writing poems because you can expres your feelings in an ven better way without hurting anybodys feelings. i made alot of poems on feelings because those are some of the ways i feel some days. i really like the way he made our final alittle easier because if it would have been something differernt i dont think i could have done it because it would have been alittle hard. now that we wrote poems and is done i am really happy that the year is over and that i am about to be a junior next year which is even more challenging. so i am going to be ready for it.

Self -Reflection

sabrinaisawriter — Fri, 22 May 2009 19:35:00 +0000

some thing that i have learned in this class is how to become a better writer. When i first came in here i really thought i would be failing this class because i thought i wouldnt know how to do the things. So i at first didnt take this class seriously, but i became to get attached to it. I knew he would be guvung allot of work but i was prepared for it. I didnt like to write poems because i thought i wouldnt know how to do it and it wouldnt make any sense to me. I begun trying my hardest and the ways he taught us and it became alot more easier to me. I know this was just an elective class but i took it as an oppurtunity that some kids wont have. it takes me out from having another boring class. I experienced and did alot of things in this class like i wrote stories, dialouges, and made poems of my own . he didnt even judge the poems because he said we were writing on how we really feel. So even though he kept giving us an tremendous amout of wrok I still liked the class because it helped me out alot.

MY FINAL WRITING PROPOSAL

sabrinaisawriter — Tue, 19 May 2009 18:48:43 +0000

I selected poems poems because i think they are easier. i really like poetry now, because I can express my feeling more. I know poetry is alll about writing from the heart. I know writing 10 poems will be a piece of cake. I plan to do all my stuff orderly , so it can be a little easier for me to complete. I also know that my writng can improve alot thats why i wont do anything like that. It is also too much to be typing and i know i wont complete it. all my stuff have to be in an orderly fashion just so my grade can be a little better and it will make life easier for me.also so i would know what i completed and what didnt complete. Although this is a lot of work to be doing at the end of the year but ii have to do it if i want to maintain my A. I always starto get lazy because the only thing that be on my mind is waiting on the summer time to come. After all this work i had to do over the year i just want to rest and go outside and just kick it and dont have to worry about school anymore. it just gets me to see how far i have come in school and how much i have matured. it makes me proud of myself becuase i know i started taking school a little more seriously. I think mr. weiler is a a very hard teacher and gives alot of work but i now know why he did it. This is just like a test to me because i know if i have taken my school work alot more seriously that i have passed. This poems being the last project of the my softmore year i know how much i have come and how far i have accomplished.

My Power Word

sabrinaisawriter — Tue, 12 May 2009 19:59:13 +0000

I chose this word because it is a really beautiful word and it really describes me. my word shows how i like to work and how i like to get the job done the right way. Dexterous means love working with hands. I like building, and creating things but i don’t like art because it just isn’t me at all. I think the word shows beauty because it really shows how a person lives their live and how they like to live it. I think that it Dexterity is a word for every helping hand i really like to help people out in their time of need even if they don’t help me. I help people all the time and most of the time i don’t get paid for it. It makes me feel like i am needed and i like helping people in thei time of need. In the futur i wont want to get in a bussiness that involves working with hands, but i’ll do it in my spare time. Whenever someone asks me for help i would be there with a helping hand. I also think i chose this word because of the way it sounds when you say it. it ahs a big rhythm in it, and i likes the way it sounds.

If i could write a best seller…..

sabrinaisawriter — Tue, 21 Apr 2009 20:20:15 +0000

if i could write a best seller it would be a non-fiction, because i would want to write about my life. I would want everybody to know about me and aall the things i have accomplished. I would like to let people know the life I have lived so far. this would make me very proud because i woudl have done something i always wanted to do. I would also tell what school i went to that got me as far as i came. I would tell them about the people in my life that i love and who love me. I would tell them about my family members the one i like and the ones i cant stand.

I would like to tell everyone about how much money I make. I also would recognize the people who helped me get where I came like the teachers who didnt put me downand always helped me nomatter how they felt about it. I would also recognize my friends the real friends and not the fake ones because their are alot of them out there right now. The one who didnt hate and didnt bring me down becaue of their jealousy and own frustration. These are some of the things I would like to show other people about my life and the people in it. This book would be a non-fiction book.

My Fairy Tale…. A happy endingg

sabrinaisawriter — Thu, 16 Apr 2009 20:58:59 +0000

The experience I had from writing this fairy tale paper is that I got to experience something like exploring my imagination. I would love to do this again because i thought it was easier than having a boring old topic thrown at us that we didn’t want to do. I also think that doing this paper made me like writing alittle more even though it was 8 pages handwritten but I got through it. I never thought that writing could have a good effect on your life. I just hope he don’t give us any more papers anytime soon, because i am “papered out” just about now.

Some people might think that writing a lot expands their minds I don’t because there is something called a limit, and everyone has theres and this is mines. I know this is school but lets be realistic about this and know that we need some time to rest. You can give us another paper in like a week, because we had a paper due in all of our classes especially the sophomore project that if we don’t do we automatically fails her class. I

I m not that strong about presenting because I hate getting in front of alot of people and presenting things that i wrote. I know that I am not a shy person but I just don’t like doing it. I know we have to get used to doing it because we would be doing it alot in college and if I want to pass I won’t have a choice but to do it. So practice makes perfect has I have been told and I believe that it is true because I would be done gotten used to doing it. I also think that presenting papers shows the class how you feel about things but I just don’t like doing it.

My Fairytale

sabrinaisawriter — Thu, 26 Mar 2009 18:52:55 +0000

My fairytale is on a good foot right now. it is starting to get very interesting its like a dream. At first i thought i could’nt do it because it had to be so long and i think that i have accomplished a lot so far in the process of finishing it. my writing has improved dramastically because now writing to me is fun when i get to pour out my feelings in a creative way. My paper is mainly about a classroom of kids that are in school that they dont want to be in, and to make times more harder for them they have a weird teacher name Mr. Lambchop. He is a teacher that gets ticked off very fast and when he gets ticked off he changes into another species besides human. The kids thougt it would’ve been a good idea for them all to team up on Mr. Lambchop because he was acting strange towards one another. Then he decided to snap. so athis just made it even more tragic for themand at the end the teacher was sorry. tune in to see what happens next. so i think this would be a very good story and i cant wait until i finish it and so you can read it and tell the world how good it is.

After 2 weeks…

sabrinaisawriter — Wed, 18 Mar 2009 18:03:46 +0000

I think my writng has improved a little because at first when I began writing I thought it was boring, and I just hated it. Now after I have been writng almost everyday I think that I can express my feelings by writing more. I think my ewriting have grown to be a little better than I thought. At first my writng wasn’t all that good because i didnt have anyone to push me and now i do. So overall the past two weeks have been a blast for me because I have accomplished something I never knew i could.

Am i a writer?

sabrinaisawriter — Thu, 05 Mar 2009 19:37:29 +0000

I do not consider myself a writer because i really hate writing .Writing to me is just a waste of time, but i have to write to be successful in life. I don’t write unless I have to for homework. If I did write alot I would love to write a book about my life. I love Maya Angelou’s poems because they are touching, and so real. Maya Angelou must have love writing because she wrote herown poetry books, and an autobiography of her own.